Black Poetry : Hopes Window

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Within vision of you, I see me. Looking out the window
    Across the horizon as the sun says goodnight
    And the moon takes its place…My tears run
    As the morning flower, closes its petals.
    My heart skips, feeling the miles closing in,
    As my soul sings a lullaby for you
    My tears began to fade, from past hurt
    Your spirit called as my love found you
    And hope gave us a chance.

    You called and my love answered
    Free within the wind I took your hand
    Unconditional…
    Nomadic in the clouds we play

    The vision within the moon
    You can see us dancing in grace divine
    As love picked us this time
    A feeling so right
    My dreams are of you at night
    For you made that light
    Holding on to the hope of
    You and I

    In that vision out the window
    Far between the land of no where
    My heart hears you in silence
    For the wind is calm
    And as you reached for me
    I reached for you

    You called and my love answered
    Free within the wind I took your hand
    Unconditional…
    Nomadic in the clouds we play

    Within that vision in the window
    I see a tear from you
    I can feel your pain
    Take my hand and together
    We can take the storm
    That covers our path
    The morning flower opens
    And here we are together

    Becoming one….
    For love gave us hope
    Once more…

    You called and my love answered
    Free within the wind I took your hand
    Unconditional…
    Nomadic in the clouds we play



    (c) 2005
    ANTHOLOGY of One Woman’s Heart
     
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    As lovers do, we always keep the lamp burning, day and night.

    I love this poem.
     
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    Awesome piece ...when love is there, it's there. May your heart seek the treasure it hunts.
     
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    extremely tyte love carries cross the maze of miles
    into the body of heart i love the way it speaks out !
     
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    re:Hope

    Angel, this is a very beautiful poem.
     
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    Thank you all for the support and love


    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    MBA

    You were on point with this piece in all the ways I usually speak of.

    I love this peace...the connection between two is so dear when both feel it.

    :thanks: for sharing this piece and reminding us that the relationship between two is very important...whether it's friends, lovers, or family. Thank you.

    :toast:
     
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    HI Sister Angel
    very lovely poem
    open
    freely
    fill with feeling
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for the love happy you all enjoyed it

    Peace
    Angel
     
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