Black Poetry : Hopeless Romantic

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking into her eyes, I feel the need
    to celebrate love with her forever…
    longer than just one day

    Her eyes reveal to me that she loves
    as strongly as I do and sometimes
    harder; testimony of how our
    romanticized affection runs hopelessly

    d
    e
    e
    p


    When I’m offered the chance to feel her
    mind,
    as true lovers have the gift to do,
    it reads like a dreamy interlude

    It reflects a splendid view on how
    we love one another; to which there
    can be no bounds…it’s an uncanny
    introspection

    Joyously we flow as
    "like"
    romantics;
    signifying not only a
    meeting of the mentals
    but
    a blending of souls…

    uninhibited
    &
    unmeasured
    &
    infinitely true

    I am therefore moved
    adoringly
    to vibe with
    subliminal thoughts
    of her in mind

    And I smile as I so eloquently
    convey the passion felt and
    expressed as this
    hopeless romantic
    so aptly deems…

    ©GQINC2K3
     
  2. Sista Steele

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    aww aww awww...
    i like this poet
     
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    I can feel the romance in the air....beautiful piece!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U go boyeeeee!!! now love is sho nuff in da RED ZONE brutha
     
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    GQ..when it comes to writing words of love...you have it all covered and then some...as usual, this too, was simply beautiful...

    K
     
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    GQ!!!! Keep on bringing them like that!!!
     
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