Black Poetry : Hope

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  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I Approach the gate.
    I can see she has left me
    What has happened to the heavens?
    It has full possession
    Taking up my time
    Yet to come.
    Ebb and flow.

    Naughty things on my mind.
    Missing.
    Thinking a lot
    Straight-thinking.
    Whatever the case may be.
    She has left me.
    Apparently.
    I Think of her now.
    Come back to me complete. ​
     
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    go through the gates and see who awaits .......:kiss1:
     
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    this was sweet and smooth love how it was expressed
     
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    Thank you for the read.
    I will rush thru the gate as soon as she arrives
    Never again to let her go.
     
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    Thanks for the read.
    I need to repair the hole where my heart use to be.

    I have to accept also that she may never return.
     
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    Continuing to fall

    Bringing this from the heart
    I see she is no longer with me
    I know she can’t be tied down
    I want only want what she could give me
    But she has to be around
    So distant she seem to me
    Endlessly
    I fall into what was only a dream

    My days are filled with empty
    My nights they seem so long
    They say it really happens
    The pride goes before the fall
     
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    There is that time when we realize that what we hope for, doesn't look promising, and geez does that hurt. That heart remains, even though it sure does hurt Brother Hodee. I felt this write. But the future does bring hope.
     
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    ahhhhhhh Hodee come get this hug.................:wave::kiss2:
     
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