Black Poetry : Hope U Haven't Given Up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Jun 22, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know you're tired of my inconsistency
    Or maybe you have officially
    given up me
    But I truly treasure what we have
    Even though sometimes I be fronting real bad
    Something about your personality and your honesty
    Trips me out because all you really want is me
    We talk for hours at a time, its crazy how the words just flow
    But sometimes I have to leave and you never want me to go
    Remember, Jamaica's sandy beaches
    Mourning over our broken heart's pieces
    When you cried and I made you laugh all night
    Told you funny stories cuz i had to make sure you were ALL RIGHT

    You have made me mad and I've made you cry
    But you still want me and I swear I don't understand why
    I respect you cuz you respect what others dont notice see
    You always make sure you get online just to read my poetry
    When I make mistakes you're the 1st one to correct me
    I apologize cuz I know I walk over you sometimes and you just let me
    Deep in your heart I know you wonder why you even talk to me
    Cuz I never give you the chance to even take that walk with me

    Just understand that my life isn't peaches n cream
    Its hard walkin in these shoes and reaching my dreams
    I dont know how to love someone who knows how to love me
    Cuz my whole life everyone I trusted always seemed to run on me
    Or maybe I'm afraid, I know you think thats impossible
    But I do fear, I just dont speak on the obstacles

    We've connected, but we've never gotten deep enough to show eachother the inner layer
    All I show you is the singing, sarcastic, silly, basketball player
    I hope you haven't given up cuz I'm not ready to end this
    Just know, no matter what I do value this friendship
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man....I'm feelin this for real:) Nice flow and it's so CUTE!you simply lettin him know
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let da feeling out
    so one's mate can hear the emotional side
    well felt ....
     
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