Black Poetry : Hope~less and De~voted

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My heart and love is devoted
    but my eyez see and remoted
    from this bitterness that's sugar coated
    deep in da soul how i now stroke it

    I'm hopeless in yo grain
    while my mind work to stay sane
    but u continue to crash my brain
    sensually as u call out my name

    I can hear u on da wing
    of a love softly u sing
    while in my slumber of this dream
    hopeless and devoted as it seem

    Touchin all my deepest affection
    sending waves so romantic
    as my heart beat goes sync
    eroticly my mind now think

    Feverishly i lone tis day
    for us to mate and play
    yet hopeless and devoted i lay
    in da depth of what u say

    U may not know of my love
    and my profolio from above
    nor my handz how they rub
    and these arms dat tenderly hug
    so i'm Hopeless and devoted .


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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As beautiful as this was, there lay a sadness therein. Hopefully, what is meant to be shall be.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    maybe, someday, someway and how it might happen thankz for the visit
     
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    Good read

    Keep your pin full of ink :darts:
     
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    $$RICH$$:
    Perfectly passionate write.


    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Hey Ghost Writer nice to see ya pen drippin again. Thankz for the love and respond

    Thank you sister 4EVERLUV for the warm visit it's alwayz nice to feel your present