Black Poetry : Hooked

Ladysoul

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I'm very new to writing and this is my first. Let me know what you think and suggestions are encouraged.


HOOKED

My man gives me good love.
Now what comes to your mind?
Maybe kisses all over your body,
And a tongue
That lingers
In
Your navel;
Then a gentle blow over it
That turns your *** on to the
Highest level of high.
Maybe it’s the sweet
In
And
Out
Motion
That makes you scream his name
And grip the sheets
As you almost lose your **** mind
When you EXPLODE in unison..
Now wipe that dirty smile off your face,
Because my man does that to me too,
But that’s not the love
I’m speaking of.
He holds my hand,
And kisses my forehead when I’m sick,
Surprises me with “Just Because” gifts, and
Says “I love you” no matter who’s around.
My Baby acts like a straight fool just to see me smile.
He shares his hopes, dreams, and fears;
Listens to me,
And needs me…
Just as much as I need him.
Make no mistake about it
When we do get it on
Even the walls cry out at the intensity of his passion,
But I can feel that same energy
When he simply
Looks at me.
Yes, his mocha brown skin has my ***
HOOKED.
I’m sitting in class
Thinking of him
Giving me all the love he has.

-Briana
 
BEAUTIFULLY scripted.:)

your man reminds me of me.:) it's love when you feel so deeply for someone that you'd do anything just to see their smile...and cry inside when that smile fades.

i love the way you do your do...Ms Briana. continue to love your man...he sounds worth it.

1luv

by the way, WELCOME TO THE PLAYGROUND. i'm gonna enjoy you.:)

baller.
 

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