Black Poetry : Honey Barbie Doll....

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  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    undefinedHoney Barbie Doll...

    Aint got it all....
    she got tiny little freckles..
    on her nose..
    Two big surgery scars..
    on the side of her two toos.
    These red bleu prints on some of her leg skin...
    and a heavy pain in her understomic and hip deep within..
    One of her legs is heading more to the left wich is causing her to
    not always walk straight when she is on her path...

    Honey Barbie Doll...

    She aint got it all...
    aint got it all...

    On yeah baby got BAck...
    so as a child she used to cover it up with big trousers..
    and heavy pants...
    A period in her young ages she used to be fat..
    and her brother used to tease her because of that..
    Than she suddenly shoot up into the air...
    and now she got some tigerstechmarks up on her..

    a ... s .... s...

    Honey Barbie Doll....

    aint got it all ...
    aint got it all...
    Honey dolls tiny shoulders..
    are bowed to the front...
    because age 11 uncles where screaming
    ""look ...titties come titties come""
    Barbie doll is quit insecure..
    because someone put his hands in her..
    when she was just a little girl...
    She tried to overcome that ....
    and gave herself to her first man..
    who,s heart was closed...
    and just left her lying there..
    but he aint bad...
    he aint bad..
    his head wasnt there..
    Than her sisterfriends were telling her...
    "'youre arms are so long""
    compare to my lenght..
    arent they normal..

    though?

    Honey Barbie Doll..
    aint got it all....

    Here them say...

    "'There she goes....
    fine like a Honey barbie doll....
    hey dolly ....mmm
    come over here dolly...
    pssst...
    dont let me get my hands on ya..
    mm i wish i would get my hands on ya..""
    "
    DoLLy is such a sweet girl....
    but sweet aint enough now in this world...
    ""you gotta be hot""!
    They aint got no time they say...
    they gotta hit that Spot ""!
    So dont speak they go..
    keep youre mouth shut...
    You might talk the evil out of me..
    just be hot..""

    So from youre first sight.....
    she got it all....

    but that aint all...
    that aint all...
    that aint all...










    she got a heart......
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop lady enjoyed the read...
    thanks for sharing
    Angel
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very lovely poem thanks for sharing this with us...keep scribing...
    it was good to see you in voice chat last week
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    he not bad , he not bad !
    dis was awesome flowing sistah tyte drop
    flow on
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice love them bay doll rhymes but let me drop this right here

    Spit intense heats on condense streets cats looking
    While my stats cooking got a rod and reel hooking
    Fish, got clusters of busters trying to stop this because
    It pop and twist brains like Nintendo games so yall pause
    Santa Claus even confused, this nation is an amalgamation
    Of whack folks on crack and dope a foul situation
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very tight poetry.:) I enjoyed reading it
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, this was so deep. The fact that she has a heart is missed by far too many, most folks just looking at outward appearances. I loved this poem.
     
  8. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey, Lady

    I enjoyed that. Thanks for sharing. :fairy:
     
  9. angelicsage

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    as a woman you have to "have heart"
    to overcome the crimes and social standards
    that will be inflicted upon you as a female

    stay strong sister and keep scribing your power ^5
     
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