Black Poetry : Honesty (2 LibertyLady)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Apr 22, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One love, fam.. had attempted to send this via email
    things jus ain't go thru
    with respecc i'm sendin this
    cause we all family
    an i gotta stay tru
    -one

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    Hey Sis,
    I don't mean 2 b rude
    or intrude on your privacy
    but i gotta stay tru
    and in truth you really fly to me
    it's something special you do
    when you take the time
    2 communicate your poetry
    it really speaks to me
    i guess i gotta crush on you
    when i first read your words
    my heart rushed
    but it had already been crushed
    and reaching out
    would probably---
    just make me
    a victim
    i took these facts like tea
    meditating

    revitalizing poetry

    -i saw you too-
    *smiling/laughing*
    shorty, i wanted to cry
    like i was looking into another world
    so beautiful
    you the clouds the trees the sky
    mystically it's like fantasy
    and a friend i never had
    this is just to share with you
    how i feel
    not to make you upset or sad
    weird cause i usually don't feel
    like i can reveal the words
    i got to say
    but on the real, i feel
    i could write to you for hours
    i hope God don't get mad
    with me
    disturbing His angel at this
    hour
    pardon me from reachin out
    i haven't been looking
    for love
    jus peace with God
    cause when i wake up in this
    world, i see a thug
    yeah right...
    i push myself through the
    weather
    i got so much to share
    not trying to push for us to be
    together
    just wanted to show
    that i care


    One love sis. From my heart. You're a beautiful person. I'm blessed
    to read your text on the internet. One love

    Antar
    Adeje Baki
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Awe! That was truly sweet!
    Surely this will place a beautiful
    smile on her face.
    That was absolutely awesome!
     
  3. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop I like this piece,
     
  4. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *grinnin*

    yeah ai-ight-thanks purple :read:
    Thanks THEONE....

    ya'll 2much

    one,
    /antar
     
  5. unfoolish1223

    unfoolish1223 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was really sweet and I know once she reads this her heart is gonna melt
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwww sookie sookie now lolol thas REALLY sweet brotha antar...:)
     
  7. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is sweet i'm sure she would appreciate it
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very sweet, if it made me smile, I know it will make her grin from ear to ear.....awwww.
     
  9. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks fam

    Thanks ya'll for tha luv in you words...


    one
    /antar
     
  10. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liter than Rocks

    to push this up on the list
    mann
    i wish i could save it for later
    i like to cook
    and slap fire on tables
    still i ain't a waiter
    i'm so secluded
    cause i'm on a righteous
    quest for paper
    to bond
    with my brethren
    while we get it on
    got me frustrated
    think how it feel
    to have the skillz
    to drop them jewelz
    butto that day
    you may ha
    neva mad(k)e
    it
    shi7
    thanks to the queens
    in our fam
    i give big ups ta God
    filling me love and
    strength when I"M pent
    against the odds
    my head i bob
    out the corner of my eye
    i c Bob
    holla back
    i got some wurk
    and i need a plane
    ta catch

    one
     
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