Black Poetry : Honestly speaking

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  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Honestly speaking I care for you more than she ever will
    I would never run out on you with some other fellow
    And give him the sweets that are labeled “yours only”
    Loyalty is key and honest I will remain
    As long as you continue to do the same

    Honestly speaking I need you beside me
    Let me guide you into this world created just for you and me
    We can make our own memories to tell our children’s children
    Lets walk this journey side by side
    Until the road comes to an end
    And eternity begins

    Honestly speaking I know you care for me
    Yet you shy away from my understanding of you
    I know you better than she could ever learn
    Don’t let something so artificial come between what is so natural
    You and I were meant
    There is no need to deny what we deserve

    And honestly speaking that very one thing is each other
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe sounded so genuine and caring about a love that is wanted...very nice.
     
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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well these are true emotions so genuine they are not exactly to the extent of my words.ly. It is just frusturating to have a friendship where you are constantly having to push your feelings to the side and watch as your friend hurts for the love of another. If only he would give us a chance, who knows what could come of it if the opportunity was there and not knowing kills me. Cause everyday my feelings get stronger. But thanks for the love
     
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    I hear ya sista...I would LOVE to hear u read this :)
     
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