Black Poetry : HOMINUM CONFESSIONES II

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    Confessions of a Man pt. II

    **My Todspaziergang**

    Where did my speech stop
    and my pen begin?
    Last night I took a walk
    down the streets of
    infinity.
    Passing ancient and almost forgotten
    memories of the man I used to be.

    Seems like I've been walking
    through some sort of twilight that
    continues without any end....
    A sort of Purgatory that grasps my
    hand like a friend....
    Still I pretend that there is nothing
    wrong,
    that I have nothing within me that
    needs to change or be reborn....
    My will continues to be my will; iron cold
    and too hard to bend.

    In this Erebus region a rain
    falls and covers me
    in a fine mist...
    images of....
    Someone warm and loving to kiss....
    I breathe and my heart quickens...
    I pass by a lone mirror of cast pewter...
    My reflection stares back in
    disgust...
    Its time for a change.
    The bell chimes in the distance and I continue walking...
    My old man cringes and cries out...
    I silence him...
    Soon it will all be over.
    No more twilight or purgatorial hell...
    I'll be free in the Most High and out of the
    confines of this dank, wet, dark hell.

    My inner soul smiles as I continue
    my walk...
    my Todspaziergang-Death Walk

    Copyright 2004
    "Son of the DayStar" Publishing
    "Poeta nascitur, non fit."
    "The Poet is born, not made."
    PropheticNsyght​
     
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    now dis here is just str8 off da hook
    love the flow
     
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    nice write indeed
    enjoyed it
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for the love pa....God bless you for your beauty.
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much baby girl!!!
     
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    A death walk, a death of the body, of the soul, of painful thoughts? A wealth of possibilities here, in a captivating write indeed.
     
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    Exactly, thank you so much ma. You are blessed.
     
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