Black Poetry : Homeless brides.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking for answers...
    he leaded me to this place...
    and i stood there on the side line of this river.....
    I had a flashback of the situation of my past Loved one..
    The sad dream of her standing up on the stairs looking at me down...
    with eyes that spoke...""i,m going to win this from you"' and me with this heavy pain in my chest ...thinking its not a battle this is not a game...

    in love there is not....
    and i know i belong to one...

    so go on.....

    So now i,m here again...
    I,ve been here before...
    and i know what to do...

    look..

    look...

    not in to the Glassbolw...
    no not like that...
    i dont predict the future..
    but i have some controle of my life..
    and i have my self..
    strong intuitions ..
    and gods guidance..
    love..
    and this dream..
    to move on..
    to find my lovers arms..
    to come home..


    So i looked into the bleuwater...
    as i saw a little reflection of myself..
    though we are uniek....
    I started walking on tha sideline...
    it followed me were i go....
    she would come out of the water...
    and we just dance together like those two sisters in ""tha colour Purple"" lauging and drink thee under the love tree and Imitate ""his "'strange moves and mistical styles and just smile , hold hands.......
    and cry...
    cause this one is all about love...
    It was time to go home..
    we hold hands and wished eachother goodluck..
    gave eachother a huge ..and said..
    we know we going to be alright cause we both know...
    "'he is somewhere out there""
    it only takes time experiance and revelation...
    we know this is all about love...
    we know this is all about real love..


    bye love,sis..

    bye love ,sis..

    just remember no matter what...
    i be here for you..
    if you want to have a talk ..
    a sister huge...
    thoug i,m a stranger for you...


    i got youre back.....


    dont we all woman walk the same path.....








    as they both continued there journey ...




    in to tha mist........
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice i enjoyed your scribe it always takes my mind to wonder
    so vivid like story telling..tight drop sis
    thanks for sharing
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes the greatest support comes from the love of self. Peaceful scribe.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said tyte deep scribing here ......
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice Ms Lady
     
  6. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oooooooooh Liberty,
    I really enjoyed this thread.....

    Sense of serenity came over me

    Very very nice.

    Beaucoup d'amour.
    moham
     
  7. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ima look into the bluewater with you...
    to see what i can see...creative piece poet
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys........


    for feeling this personal scrybe...


    i,m so tired of :pc:


    and :swim: in tha mist ...
     
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