Black Poetry : Homegrown...A Love Story

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Apr 27, 2006.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She has a sultry skin color, something like Georgia clay
    Its like caramel sunshine mixed w/ a chardonnay
    Her flesh tone is well cultured and evenly baked
    Smooth to the touch and umm sugar sweet to the taste

    her eyebrows are well groomed and compliment her chiseled face
    they add mystery and a taste of surprise
    She struts with class, confidence and an inviting grace
    As if heaven were snuggled in between her soft thighs

    She’s my at-the-crib-freak, but a lady in the streets
    She holds it down like a grandma in training
    She cooks soul food in an apron and some fire red pumps
    with boy shorts…please believe my baby girl aint playing

    She admires my insecurities and how imperfect
    I’m working hard at being vulnerable ‘cause this love is worth it
    She doesn’t run from my faults she’s proud I even put them out there
    I don’t just give advice…I give her ministry and keep my woman covered in prayer

    She’s in love with my dreams and my passion for cars
    Now she asks if she can drive some day
    She turned the music up loud…hit the gas and made it growl
    As we skidded off in clean Chevrolet

    She relates to soul music and sings the words out loud
    She does her dance to the melody….now that’s what a groove’s ‘bout

    Her daddy was deacon
    Her mama was big boned
    She’s the best spades partner
    My baby is....homegrown

    NittyGritt (c) 2006 www.rhymster.com/members/nittygritt
     
  2. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  3. Ctorietella

    Ctorietella New Member MEMBER

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    I really love the sincerity in this drop. Much love for not being afraid to share your story.
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this took me in , i love how u pose this piece well written
    like a touch of gold awesome
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IM REALLY FEELIN DIS MY BRATHA
    HAD A LOT OF STRONG LUV 4 A SISTAH IN DIS PIECE
    NICE DROP SO FLO ON WIT NONSTOP
    FRUM YO SISTAH G.A


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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