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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Colors change during this time
    Throughout the rain & sun shining days
    Inevitable is the tone that cums to surface
    The ability to forsee and see through
    From past liked accurances

    The leaves go frome ever green to red
    Look outside and think what could've happened?
    Was it the brightness or dropless of solidarity
    Trying to trace back when did this begin
    Always remembering meraculous is the word

    Grass becoming greener cause of the comforter
    The heat of sun drenching misunderstood neccessities
    Process of preparing for a san colored migration cuming
    With the obligation of following the soils agitation of required changes
    The green is on phase must be ready for the soil to cum up top

    Rotations the globe goes through takes us back to elementary school
    Colors represent words of warship
    That's the way exploding of suffication is avoided
    Wondering is the best way to meditate how we rotate and atlast fit
    If the seasons ever cease to migrate
    I hope we all really have be lead to an applicable trail home.
     

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    From winter to spring to summer to fall
    To so on and so on rotation’s call
    Nature’s roaming
    Goes on and
    Earth-tone browns lounge
    Before leaves fall down
    And coolness of night turns to day
    As yesterday’s warmth begins to fade
    Welcoming winter’s shade

    (for me, that would be snow white)

    THE PATH HOME IS STRAIGHT
    but narrow
     
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    Continuation of on and on​
    Irresistable must to contend on​
    No running around the thieves​
    Yet and lastly reliving natures true green​
    From each one there contends​
    When do we decide to understand what we realize​
     
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    Wow! This is deep and soothing at the same time. And I just love the response from baller and then your response afterwards. This is awesome! You are deep. I had to read it a couple of times to take in as much meaning that i could and it makes me reflect. I just love how you said:

    Rotations the globe goes through takes us back to elementary school
    Colors represent words of warship

    It does make me think about 'exploding' and choosing other ways, simplistic ways through meditation on how to remain calm and at peace in troubling times... reflecting on the seasons, the earth's rotation and the colors it brings. This is great sister. Thanks!
     
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    I'm really glad you enjoyed this!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully scribed like walking through a season
     
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    Sister Poet Candeesweet,

    Through your writing, you have transformed Fall in such a way that no one else can lay claim to its majesty. It's all you. So many of your colors shine through vividly in this piece. It and you are beautiful. (smile)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The seasons and collors collide great to inbark onto a new season which is hushed with the humbalness of life and serinity!
    I appreciate the compliments TotalView and$$RICH$$!!
     
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