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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    which way to go?
    which way will lead me home?
    the farther i go
    seems like the less i know
    Lord i need you
    is that what you wanted to hear?
    i gotta hear you
    can`t ignore that you`re right here

    take all this guilt, all this pain
    all this heartache, oh I lay
    down my life, down my strife
    and cleanse my soul

    i`ve got two roads
    one looks like it`ll carry me home
    the other looks grand
    but in depth i see deception
    i have had tears and stress
    though God just knows
    i`ve carried this burden
    today lift it from my soul...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    forth thy will hear you and comfort you
    surely your asking will not go un-answered

    speak to thee as will .......i feel ya sista
     
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    So happy to know that God can lead you homeward bound in the direction you need to go. I know this feeling poet.
     
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    we can be led in so many directions and realize we are lost and then we surrender. I feel u!
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments:) this was originally a song but i turned it into a poem...
     
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    Excellent write of true feelings
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks poetrymama...
     
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