Black Poetry : Home!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PurpleMoons, Apr 11, 2004.

  1. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Home

    Stuck on stupid
    paralyzed at go
    I sit here in this chair
    reflecting on the unknown
    many thoughts trickled down my cortex
    many experiences I have come to know
    but nothing can penetrate
    the burning desire to be home
    A hair line string
    invisible to the eye
    one end attached to my crown
    the other to my spine
    Home!,
    how sweet!,
    where the spirits run wild
    Oh! How I long to be part of that crowd
    The illusions of what reality is
    keeps cramping my inner seed
    I need, I want, I long, I dream of the opportunity to once again be free
    So much drama in the universe
    so many cries for help
    So many lost souls
    have forgotton their God given purpose
    But yet I keep traveling back here
    Back here to feed the intellect of my higher power
    Learning, growing, suffering, falling,
    exploring all of his beneficent knowledge
    All though I come back here
    I'm never truly alone
    My soulmate, My friend, My partner
    Not far behind does he roam
    he knows of the place
    where my spirit rather be
    so he holds my hand and walks with me
    until the day we both are free!!!!!!!!!!!!

    HOME! The vacation resort for souls!
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the vibe off this
    aint nothing like home
    oh so free
    nice drop
    enjoyed this top
    to bottom
    continue on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the place we all lone to be one day
    i will get there ...i felt all of this
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In God there is always home, like the way you crafted this.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh PurpleMoons, I do know of what you speak. I frequently feel this way myself. (it is said that Pisces deeply want to go home, no matter how well-adjusted they become to this planet, which is true for me). Sometimes people and their pain and this world and it's stage is just too much. This is beautifully written, my friend. What a gift.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!

    this is an awesome write!

    I truly enjoyed it. thank you. :)


    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    You got that right Mzblkangel! There aint no place like home! Sometimes you got to dig deep within just to get a taste of it. I'm happy you enjoyed it!

    Longing with anticipation Mr.Rich! Missing it all the while. Feeling it all the time!

    In God, The beneficent, The most compassionate one! Watz, Your words are like music to my soul!

    Gempis, Quote[Pisces is the sign of tremendous faith, while Cancer is the sign of the soul. The relationship between the signs Cancer and Pisces is very strong in the astrological lineage of Black people the world over...]Quote by Aqil It's a yearning that words can't master in description! I know you know exactly what I mean.

    Hey cocobutter, Just trying to express it on paper!

    Thanks everybody for the love you's bring!
     
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