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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blaquebutterfli, Aug 29, 2003.

  1. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    between Venus and infinity
    beauty and depth
    light and music
    where raindrops cover clouds
    and butterflis sing
    sand is diamonds
    I am the beach

    fireworks at sunrise
    bring passion at starlight
    red and hot and yellow
    sticky, dripping, constant
    you are, then lost

    between whispers and memories
    universe and change
    speed and distance
    where fall brings leaves
    and speech is silence
    waterfalls are mirrors
    you are the music

    sex on the wind
    brings honey to the water
    sweet and blue and wet
    thick, milky, fleeting
    I am, then lost

    between Mars and misunderstanding
    emotion and time
    sense and sensitivity
    where dreams create yesterdays
    and I'm the girl from Ipanema
    atmosphere is golden
    we are together

    unity of races
    brings tears of sorrow
    stabbing and grey and dismal
    purging, burning, lasting
    we are, then eternal
     
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    luvNwords Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol.....u r on some deep stuff....i'm liking your work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was very down in da deep mental of mind
    let it all out .....tyteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Yes, this was deep...and kinda erotic. I like. :D :lol:

    Thanks for sharing.

    :toast: :D
     
  5. blaquebutterfli

    blaquebutterfli Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    luvNwords - glad you're feeling it

    $$RICH$$ - I'll do what I can

    Monetary - you are too much, but glad to give you pleasure
     
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    ur doing just beautiful i love how u flow
     
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    Loving the flow Blaque.. filled with longing...
     
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    This poem is deeply expressive. Thank you for sharing this.
     
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    (snaps) wonder-FULL
    artistic
    I like this..
    Flow on...
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa! There may be pretenders out there, but you are the real deal. This was exquisite.
     
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