Black Poetry : Home Sweet Home

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  1. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Broken and splintered,
    the shards of my mind lay in a crackled pile of
    shattered Coke bottles, sprinkled with saliva and
    a few drops of dried corn syrup.

    The bricks are cold and hard but provide adequate comfort
    for my anesthetized body, leaking rum and cold sweat
    into the remains of the night.

    Somewhere, wherever, my puzzled feet will pitch me
    into a stainless steel night deposit slot
    and it will be home until I get there.
     
  2. LISTERSCRIBIN'

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    wowww, ra, i'm still lovin' yo style, fo sho, dear poet. this piece is quite nyce.
     
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    hmmmmmm Amun-Ra

    you got me think'n on this one
    but then you do that with every one

    very nice

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    seeing it from the other side gives a new perspective to "homeless." the street is home to them.
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    Yep,

    Ra, does incline one to scratch the dome in thought!!!

    Excellent my brotha!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lived There Once

    Not a nice place--plus the matresses are hard as rocks--well, they usually are rocks--Ra
     
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