Black Poetry : Home Improvement

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why that record playing
    Love don't live here,
    Anymore...

    Ain't no good lovemaking
    Our bed don't squeak,
    Like before

    When you get right down to it
    We're just slumming
    Each wanting,
    Home repair

    Can you do your share
    Act if you care ~

    Why the children saying
    Love don't play here,
    Anymore...

    Little hearts are breaking
    Crying eyes and
    Diss'n toys

    As that door is closing
    Walls enclosed,
    You're adored

    Fix 'er upper baby
    Build your castle
    From the floor

    Want a love make over
    Insulating,
    Keeping warm



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2004
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home Improvement
    yeah..
    soundslike a plan to me
    tool belt ready...
    nice one
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop brutha
    da home need it ..
    got my tools in hand
     
  4. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home improvement...

    I can dig it, bruh.
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey...
    I'm relatin on this one
    get that insulation rolling...
    I'm always for home improvement
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yea, sometimes you have to fix things from the ground up...really liked this drop.
     
  7. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love this, 1poet. you tied it all together
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home improvement
    nicely posed...
    flow on...
     
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