Black Poetry : Home Improvement

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Mar 24, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Licentious...
    In a cardboard box
    Served up some love
    On the house
    Hobbyhorse Brown,
    Found us out
    Her daddy,
    Whipped ~
    My wet-
    Nursed spouse

    Living by the rules-
    She made...
    Mud pies,
    Drying in the shade
    Feeling right at home-
    In bed,
    Un-making love...
    Rub-a-dub, dead

    Pretty babies,
    Shared our little home
    Come as they are,
    All grown!
    Boys, pray this-
    Sugar daddy prayer...
    Hobbyhorse,
    Don't tell the Lord I fear

    Imagination,
    Real TV-
    Released...
    The manchild in me-
    Holding down,
    A sex fantasy
    Sweet-mental, girl-
    And me

    Umpteen years...
    Has it been?
    Notify my next of kin,
    Old girl, just turned out the lights
    Here we go again, Dolemite!



    1poetsought ~ copyright 2003
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes yes yes!!!!!
    1poet ya on fire
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tag... you're it!
     
  4. Moses the Poet

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    Skills.
    I like this. It reads like a smart nursery rhyme for grown folks.
    It's well balanced too. I'm gonna be checking back for more of your work.

    Always Peace.

    Andrew
     
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