Black Poetry : Home Alone....(In her pleasure zone)

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  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thick voiced and breathless
    she answers the phone
    The caller asks "are you busy?"
    She says, "yes I am home alone"
    "Can you talk ?"the caller persists
    "Not now, really" she insists
    Puzzled the caller hangs up the phone

    Then her fingers resume to roam
    starting again on her skin
    on her neck under her chin
    down to one breast
    then to the other
    around her belly
    soft as a feather
    down over her mound
    to touch her lips so wet
    she begins to pet

    Other hand on her thigh
    she lets out a sigh
    a gasp
    a moan
    the sounds of her pleasure
    in being alone
     
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    he wanted to tell her
    there's no reason to be
    alone in her pleasure
    ...just pleasuring thee

    he wanted to show her
    there is another way
    to elicit the effects
    of her gentle hip sway

    he wanted her to know
    he'd be there for her
    to watch
    to love
    to hold
    to care

    he...wanted...to...hmmm.
     
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    gaylee.


    mmm mmm mmm... you have taken it...
    "there" & itsallgood!! :D i sho nuff
    enjoyed the read... & the imagery was
    fantastic. mmm mmm mmm!

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    yes...

    it is amazing what develops in terms of intimate opportunities when we find ourselves alone...at home.... in the case of the caller... I can understand his puzzled state of mind.... the moment as well as its importance was missed...it was the other side of that classic case of "you had to be there"....

    he should've been. :wink:

    love this to the nth!

    alyce
     
  5. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller-I am sure whe would have stayed on the phone if she would have heard your words.:blush:

    Elayne-Thank you for reading. And imagery is what I am working on, your encouraging words are great and really help.:)

    Alyce-YES, he should have, could have, but would have? Thanks as always for the read.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    now i know how it goes
    when she sit home alone
    her fingers roam
    her little home
    bringing on da love moans

    he should have been
    but wasn't needed den
    wooooooooweeeeeee!!!!!
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ I think you said it better than I. LOL Thank you for the read. :)
     
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    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Based on the title...

    I had no idea. Interesting peace. A tasteful take on an often neglected subject. Kudos to you, Gaylee.
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia Maishani- Thank you for your read and kind words. And thank you for the inspiration to enhance the title. I should have a warning there maybe? LOL
     
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    thatz tha way 2 tell it gyrl - on tha rawest of da real tip - do that sista - speak yo mind ;)

    diggin dat TRUENESS

    1luv
     
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