Black Haiku : holiday cheer

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  1. TotalView

    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa, it's christmas eve
    and i have been a good girl
    well naughty but nice

    sat on santa's lap
    whispered in his ear my list
    then he whispered back

    baby you want that?
    yep, got my stockings ready
    stuff them to the brim

    looked at me and grinned
    started digging through his bag
    what i want in there?

    no, not hardly, hon
    need the keys to santa's sleigh
    to whisk you away
     
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    I love this...
    the subtlety of the message
    and storyline are superb.
     
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    Thank you. You are superb, my friend.

    Merry Christmas!

    (smile)
     
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    TotalView ... this did read a little naughty ... :love:

    Love it and Love You!

    Happy Holidays Beloved!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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