Black Poetry : Holding On Waaay Too Long!

[HODEE]

Holding on Waaay to Long

Your point about knowing when to throw
In the towel is so true to relationships.

In the bowel of the relations of the ship
Factors mount, complications unite.

Then there is a stagnation of sleep ( stay ) in one spot.
If by chance one awakes. Before the other.
Love should call the truth.

If one awakes and calls the truth
And the other remains or chooses to remain asleep.
Then it is time to call it quits.

 

[cherryblossom]

Thank you so much, Lurk! Yeah, I was going for humor but it really is a SAD situation for both parties; and if children are involved, it's even sadder because they don't get to see an example of what a covenanted relationship is between a man and a woman.

There is a difference between being a "provider" and being a husband and a father. And a difference between being a "homemaker" and a wife and a mother.

 

[cherryblossom]

Holding on Waaay to Long

Your point about knowing when to throw
In the towel is so true to relationships.

In the bowel of the relations of the ship
Factors mount, complications unite.

Then there is a stagnation of sleep ( stay ) in one spot.
If by chance one awakes. Before the other.
Love should call the truth.

If one awakes and calls the truth
And the other remains or chooses to remain asleep.
Then it is time to call it quits.

Hodee, you said it so much more succinctly than I did!

I went all "over the river and through the woods." And you cut straight down the middle!

 

[HODEE]

Hodee, you said it so much more succinctly than I did!

I went all "over the river and through the woods." And you cut straight down the middle!

The entire ORCHESTRA rendered a "Swan Song"
Even a final pounding of the resounding Gong
Did NOT move them from their positions
*Too caught up in dysfunction and denial's conditions*

No, they still could not catch the glaring clues
The Winds and Woods even played the Blues!

I enjoyed how you unraveled this situation in flow.
I have to be careful cutting down the middle
because everything is not cut and dried as I can sometimes view them.

I do believe in making a decision after Consideration and Conversation.

I do know if in a relationship, things should be open for all communicating.
A listening ear should always be available from both and

A open mind and heart to mend
some of the cuts and disconnects

For Relation Ships
Do Hit Lie Burg's and began to sink.

I often think. Know where your ship is.
In a male / female situation
He should have yours tied to his, or if you prefer and he doesn't mind
Because He is secure in his own
Tie his vessel to yours
as you both sail in one direction,
one goal or one relations in a relation.

 

[$$RICH$$]

whewwwwww!!!!
lol
wayyyyyyy toooooo longgggg!!!!
love the flava of this joint