Black Poetry : Holding Her...Touching 101

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 20, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are times when it’s even better than sex
    Those quiet times when her head lays on your chest
    She just needs a place for her heart to rest

    She’s said it before
    It doesn’t need repeating
    She only needs you to hear
    Her tender heart beating

    It’s during these times
    You’ll feel who she is
    All she hopes to be
    The rhythm of her breathing
    Is the all-important key

    Feel when to hold her
    Just a bit tighter
    Make her safe and warm
    Make her day a little lighter

    Without her saying a word
    You’ll feel her love for you
    Yes Youngblood, sometime better than sex
    That’s what a loving hug will do

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mr. Beat

    this is the first in the series, right?

    I'm waiting for the upper division courses, too now! ;)

    This is what I'm talking bout! LOL


    SWT
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome...!

    ...but you know this...
    powerful!

    ~speechless~
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE...

    Professor of love and life...and all things nice...the {sometimes} things...warming the heart of a Queen...the little things we do...that gently say, I LOVE YOU...

    Professor BE.
    the class presents you with the A+ award.
    thanks for the lessons.
     
  5. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so sweet!!

    your words show a passionate understanding of what a woman really needs..the deeper levels of her mans' love...
    makes me want to get hugged right now!!

    K
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very passionate scribe...
    and oh so true
    thanks for sharing....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome tyte lovely flowing bruh !
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...tyte...
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seems so simple, yet some forget....and oh, so true. This was right on target.
     
  10. Poeticsoulsista

    Poeticsoulsista Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is sooooo true thanks for posting.

    Poetic Sista
     
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