Black Poetry : hold up, gurlfriend...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Apr 18, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I watched, from a bench, as she crossed the park
    Framed by the glow of the sky before dark
    A form fitting dress caressed her beautiful frame
    Eyes, dark and lovely, as I asked her name

    “what’s up playa?” she said with a smile
    “the name is Barbara. You can put it on file
    better yet, my brutha, here’re the digits, too
    toss’em and you’re mine. Now, do what you do”

    she sauntered away as I stared after her
    confident…secure…not said but inferred
    her body spoke volumes of what she could do
    all I could think was…”**** boo”
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller~

    Dang, Boo got it like that??!! :lol:
    Nice flow to this piece...!!
     
  3. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    somethin' else!!!

    You've got skillz ~b~;)
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2urSoul/Afridancr...

    thanks for the love...and the read.

    peace.
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BALLER....

    just like in days of old... you could always
    make me smile when i didn't feel like it! :)

    i was just perusing the pages when i stumbled
    across this one... it was "Cutesey Tyght"
    (i created that term just for this piece.peace) :lol:

    SmilinNow...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller,

    Missed this bro...but letting the fam revisit...

    :peace:
    GQ
     
  7. poeticdelight

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    this was tight!

    pd
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    hold up wait a minute

    i'm feeling dis

    ****

    dssNY
     
  9. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This line was enough to keep my attention--Amun-Ra

    ;)
     
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