Black Poetry : hold that thought

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  1. Sha'iyn

    Sha'iyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm.. vanilla ice cream, my favorite
    hold that thought
    savour it, play with it, go throughout the day with it

    ah.. nothing like a crisp cherry coke
    hold that thought
    taste it, don't waste it, you paid for it

    d*** she fine!
    hold that thought
    in the back of your mind, let wind and grind, don't waste too much time

    ouch! my big toe
    hold that thought
    and aim it at a foe, remember what they promised, remember what they owe

    rest in peace to all my loved ones
    hold that thought
    reminisce on the fun, grieving has already begun, through pain you gain wis dom

    so, hold your meager thoughts and mold them to perfection
    give them purpose, sight and direction
    don't let them only give an erection
    pet and caress them with affection
    for that thought holds weight
    quarks that cannot be measured
    by the levels we create
    your thought s are recorded
    so, say them freely but, with conviction
    speak proud to be redeemed
    and loud when in redemption
    your tears, fears, and cheers come from these very emotions
    your thoughts created oceans shaped mountains
    and left caves open
    grass began growing life as we know was bred
    this is an omen..
    there was commotion that made one think to leave us dead
    so, now we have another chance to add to the mist of minds
    that floats below the atmosphere and determines our time
    the more you cause chaos and involve yourself in pride
    there are beings thinking likewise...
    "maybe this thinker needs to die"
    hold that thought!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A positive thought can build into one with even more power behind it, a negative thought can be molded into positivity. I both enjoyed and appreciated the genuine feel of these lines, and the message conveyed therein poet.
     
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    Sha'iyn:
    Nice joint full of thought!!!!
    As always I am moved....



    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tasting every bit of this which leaves a reat feelin and positive direction
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i don't know about dying man

    but i didn't see no "chocolate"

    here

    lol
     
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