Black Poetry : Hold Out

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Feb 24, 2008.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold out
    Only to be told out
    Fold out
    Stole out
    Tha bottom

    In old out
    It's slow out
    Sold out
    Can't Hold Out
    Feel old at it

    Cuz Im tha cat tha gat at it
    Just bold out
    Soul strength rolled out of it became
    the flame that showed life lessons
    Stealth

    Hold out.
    Like bricks I'm solid
    Aftermath is a mutha
    If you got it

    Game played ova

    and

    ova

    and

    ova

    turn ova

    play games like rova

    skinny roamer

    still ill

    like tha ninth inning

    home run

    and irish clovers

    if ya get lucky
    I'm going to hold out mayne

    I get weak mayne

    But that pot of gold they say is at tha end of the rainbow

    Well, I want it

    I want it all

    And I'm winning

    To tha finish line
    I'm blazing

    Like I'm going to loose my mind

    Leaving no one left behind

    Aggression in all

    While I'll hold out

    Let loose

    Be

    My mind

    Let Loose

    Be

    My mind

    Let loose

    Be

    My mind...

    Desert Storm
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Sis
    While I was reading this piece
    I could see ya, rocking this on the mic
    because it have feeling with a beat
    of the street. You not holding out at
    all in the drop sis.
    Yes indeed let it flow, let that mind loose

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Enjoyed the rhythm and pace of this piece, poetess, keep it flowing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaa! baby girl u drop the thang on me here
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, thank u my bros and sistahz....
    always appreciating ya presence as ya flow wit me! Thank u bluewater, hee,hee,hee....
    watzinaname....thank u too for flowing wit me.
    Rich...thank u for flowing wit me too bruh.

    Much love peace and blessings,
    Desert Storm
     
  6. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i feel your strength

    i see your passion

    that's why you my west coast soldier mayne
     
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