Black Poetry : Hold On!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Apr 12, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If you're torn
    Challenges come just as easy as a breathe

    Friends desert you
    In your time of need

    Boyfriends/Girlfriends anger you
    Leave you tattered and you're seeking a refuge

    Can't pay your bills
    Lights turned off

    Water turned off
    And not enough food to eat

    Loss of loved ones
    Leaves a hole in your heart

    To all the broken hearted
    See what I have started...

    God has come to deliver you
    Release the shackles
    And inhabits your praise and release you to be saved!

    I'm going to praise you
    Don't want no rocks crying out for me

    I'm goin to go
    Even if my motha don't make it
    Even if my fatha don't repent
    My brotha don't want to be saved

    I'm going to go
    So hold on!

    You can make it
    And you know what this means

    And now you're old enough to understand
    When churh members and momma shouted out groaned and moaned
    Danced through the holy ghost
    Won't let me go!

    So hold on!
    Better yet hold out!

    In the mid night hour
    He's going to work in your favor
    He's going to turn it around!

    If you feel you can't take it no more
    Don't ignore the pain you feel inside

    The burdens can be easily lifted in Jesus Christ Jesus
    There's healing and victory in the word

    (Continue to Praise!)

    Desert Storm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That right saint,
    God doesn't flatter or critique
    But takes the time to read you
    Loving us as sheep

    Keep sharing, Amen?

    1poetsought ~
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Amen sista indeed healing in da word

    Brad $$ Maximus.......critique cannot be
    it's a warnning from thee
    share wisdom of heart it's where it start
    word !
     
  4. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Breath then release. Thankyou it was just what I needed. loved it!
     
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