Black Poetry : Hold Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Gaylee, Oct 14, 2002.

  1. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold me please
    wrap your arms strong
    around me
    first gently
    then so tight
    with all your might
    holding on to never let go

    Wrap your legs
    around mine
    entertwine
    touching toes

    We face
    nose to nose
    breathing deep
    our chests embrace
    pressing
    pressing
    into the same space

    Our eyes meet
    staring
    declaring
    our love

    Our lips touch
    lightly
    softly
    touching
    tongues

    Your manhood rising
    my womanhood throbbing
    to hold you
    lightly
    gently
    my hips sway slightly
    to take you in
    and
    hold you
    tightly
     
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    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Whew !!!! get me praising da Lawd ... then switch up on a Sista !!! :lol:

    Whew !!! ... Let me go turn the air up in here !!!!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Whew !!! some more...Got my arms and shoulders achin'
     
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    My my

    I thought that this were going to be all romantic and lovely and then you put that little erotic twist in there that made me go....ooooh....and oh my! Wonderfully done..nice way to keep us guessing.
     
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    I am not one to not give props when due and let me tell you, there due..... go girl!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    holding u tight
    throughout da night
    as we entertwine
    so gentle & sweet
    as our heart skip a beat
    eye 2 eye
    in mesmerized maze
    as our love roam
    into a blissful glaze
    lips touching lips
    we kiss in a tongue twist
    tasty treat u r
    from head to feet
    caressing ya motions
    in dis erotic notion
    as u sway to da side
    ready 4 my love ride
    standing strong
    hards as a bone
    u moan
    i groan
    dis feeling
    ain't no wrong
    bring it on !
    body shaking N' baking
    for another massive bliss
     
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