Black Poetry : Hold Me

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  1. gottaluvher143

    gottaluvher143 Member MEMBER

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    After hours of passionate love making
    heart pounding, breath taking
    when every bone in my body is aching...
    Hold Me

    When there are no words to be said
    and we lay silently in bed
    so quiet I can hear the pitter patter of thoughts running through your head...
    Hold Me Tight

    When I feel your hand stretch out to reach me
    after i've learned all the lessons you wish to teach me
    as I rest comfortably on top of you and feel your chest rise and fall beneath me...
    Hold Me Tighter

    when the rhythm of our heart beats becomes one
    and the bed rocking love making is done
    after the sexual race to orgasm has been won...
    Hold Me Tightest

    after we've shaken the universe and shattered the earth
    and you've thoroughly quenched your sexual thirst
    as we lay in this hotel room wondering who'll get up to leave first...
    Let Me Go
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again I like your poetry!
     
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    Describing emotions that need to be embraced, and realizing when they need to be relinquished. The end sort of surprised me, but not in a bad way, liked the twist, and enjoyed the well written read.
     
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    when it all ova
    the sweetness from
    the lover hold on tight
    when time to go let go
    for another night
    this was awesome tyte lovin the flow and style
    smile poetess and take a bow.......................
     
  5. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OO yeah, I love the way you ended this. I'm diggin your style.
     
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    enjoyed this like your style...Angel
     
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    I like the flow
    and especially how you ended this
     
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