Quiet Poetry Lounge : Hold Me

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold me when I’m here
    Miss me when I’m gone
    Hold me when I’m scared
    Right me when I’m wrong
    I would never hurt you even if I could
    I would never lie to you even if I should.

    Let me know your secrets
    Let me know your there
    Let me know you luv me
    Let me know you care
    I will hold your hand and give you what you need
    I will help you find everything in me.

    Maybe I’m just blind
    Maybe I can’t see
    Maybe I luv you
    Maybe you luv me
    Hear my words and try to understand
    That I’m your woman and you’re my man.

    Tell me your worries
    Tell me what you need
    Tell me your story
    Tell it all to me
    Nevermind the world it’s only us that’s key
    Now that I have you I’m finally free.

    So

    Hold me when I’m here
    Miss me when I’m gone
    Hold me when I’m scared
    Right me when I’m wrong
    I would never hurt you even if I could
    I would never lie to you even if I should

    a poem from back in tha day much luv fam
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i'll hold u now
    i'll hold u later
    i'll hold u anywhere

    i'll let u into my heart
    i'll luv u from da start
    i'll share my all
    i'll be their each time u call

    i'll be compassion
    i'll caress ya fears
    i'll even kiss those tears
    i'll miss u when ya gone
    i'll be of joy when ya home

    let me hold u ??...................really loved this flow
     
  3. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes hold me please :)

    thanks for the loving response I really liked it thanks for feeling me RICH much luv
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi Serenti, :wave:

    BEAUTIFUL!!

    :toast: :toast: :toast: :toast:

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    anything for u sis.......wuv ya i feel u every lick and stroke
    made here
     
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    Serenti, this was quite a serene piece. Feeling your flow!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwww RICH thanks for all your wuv

    Sierra thanks for the comliment girl :) much luv :heart:

    angel thanks for feelin me on this one luv ya girl much luv
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    just hold me and don't let me go
     
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    I'll hold u close
    ur my choice
    together we are a voice

    so let me hold u
    tyte and right
    to a sweet delight

    let me hold u
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm all yours
     
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