Black Poetry : Hold Me Down....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Feb 9, 2004.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold Me Down!


    Hold Me Down
    Hold Me Down

    No!

    You can't hold me down.
    For I have transcended like time beneath six-feet underground

    Enshrined and entombed in this physical cocoon.

    This modern day Remsies emerging from his surcofficus,
    While these written words flow from my vacofficious.

    This Physical can be held down by shackels and prisions
    cops with glocks caught up in the systems rythims.

    Battons batting on serious RBI's
    Like some kind of baseballplayer in a cop's disguise.

    But you can't hold me down
    No you can't hold me down

    Hogtied like a pig on a rotisserie rack
    Bound and cooked like some Hawaiian snack.

    Pulled into a black hole
    That you control

    Like some kind of S&M slave?
    Master,
    Master<
    Please stop I'll behave.

    PLEASE!!

    My mind flows 360 degrees
    As free as the breeze that flows over Mountains, Oceans and trees.

    And you own no shackles that can contain this force.

    Even my dreams have more might
    Without a pen to write.

    no markers,
    no pencils,
    No use for a stencil.

    You can't even begin to precieve
    what my mind can achieve.

    Mental pyrimads constructed
    Skyscrapers destructed.

    Coochie that I never had
    Oh yes...
    In my minds eye I done F**ked it.

    I've have been there and done that
    And like jay-z says
    I'm going to do it again!

    See....

    You can't hold me down
    You can't hold me down

    Like some Bamboozled fool
    dancing for a Bamboozled you!

    Chess cated
    Witch crafted

    manTan and Sambo'ed with nothing to say

    Image stroked and then raped like a thief in the night
    james looses his job every episode but it's still Dynomite??

    Good Times??
    Come on now....

    NO!
    NO!
    NO!


    You cant
    Hold me down!

    :maddd:
    Caramelpython​
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said no one can hold ya back now
    flow on forward .....tyte drop bruh
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop...
    no one can hold ya down indeed
    just flow on.....
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW... :jawdrop:
    Enjoyed that fiercely scribed peace ...
    Keep flowing Poet Brother ...


    Much Peace,
    Akilah
     
  5. PositiveMindset

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    It's impossible 2 hold U down when your mind supports U.

    It's like crutches made with the strongest metal.

    Do your thing, bruh.
     
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    wow...you're right they can't hold you down. do your thing brotha
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felt the power of the words, flow on brotha.
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fight on my people we shall overcome! the only ones who can hold us down are ourselves and our own deamons inside of ourselves.
    Quote: If you dont have confidence in self, you are twice defeated in the race of life, for with confidence you have won even before you have started..."Marcus garvey":End Quote
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AHhh YES!!! My brotha when our KINGS like yourself SPEAK and SING the songs of carrying ON!!
    I can do none else but :bowdown:
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow

    thats real right there. u str8 up laid it!! im lovin it n feelin the determination.
     
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