Black Poetry : hold me baby (2001)

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  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a song i wrote about 2.5 years ago
    i haven't really let anyone read or heart it cuz i can't sing
    thanks
     
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    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold me Baby

    As the sun sparkles within your eyes, such an adorable brown
    The sweet toffee coffee skin, so round
    As the wind caresses the luster of your hair
    I realize that I don’t want to be anywhere

    The feeling of joy that you give me
    The touch of fingertips seem to deliver me
    To a place of heavenly bliss
    A vibrating sensation of passion each time we kiss

    Ain’t no other place I’d rather be
    Hoping that no one would capture thee
    My baby, that sweet lady who favorite color is a red affection
    Boo, let your warmth and sweetness guide me in your direction

    (Chorus)
    Hold me baby, tell me what’s on your mind
    Unlock the door, tell me what you find
    My heart enclosed in a gift box enwrapped with a bow
    Hold me baby, don’t let go, let your love grow
    Hold me baby, tell me what’s on your mind
    Unlock the door, tell me what you find
    My heart enclosed in a gift box enwrapped with a bow
    Hold me baby, don’t let go, let your love grow

    Sometimes I just want to take you, dim the lights low
    Caress your body, kissing you so slow
    Stroke my fingers around your precious head, nibbling on your ear
    No need to worry, love is the only one watching us in the atmosphere

    Lay your body on the bed, remove the sheets
    Relax your mind as I feel upon your rising heat
    Let me guide my hands around
    Don’t be shy boo, let me hear that pleasurable sound

    As you began to feel me, I whisper sweet words for your mind
    Holding you as you let go and let the night unwind
    Let out a moan as I slide my love inside of you
    Slide out as I let you do what you do

    Candlelight, ice melting as the temperature reaches a climax
    We hold each other in ecstasy, caressing each other’s backs
    Now tell me how do you feel
    My elegant ebony dove, I love you, that’s for real

    (Chorus)
    Hold me baby, tell me what’s on your mind
    Unlock the door, tell me what you find
    My heart enclosed in a gift box enwrapped with a bow
    Hold me baby, don’t let go, let your love grow
    Hold me baby, tell me what’s on your mind
    Unlock the door, tell me what you find
    My heart enclosed in a gift box enwrapped with a bow
    Hold me baby, don’t let go, let your love grow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was awesome time to get a lable coz it's ready
    to be dropped surely a singer will be happy to bust
    a demo...
     
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    This was beautiful, I can imagine this
    being grooved as a hot R&B track!
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot:THIS IS A PLAAATTTINUM TRACK!!!!!:hot:

    When is the CD dropping?

    Much Love
    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
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