Black Poetry : Hold It Down

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Grabbed the brass ring I found
    On life's merry-go-round
    Welcomed evil into town
    Now I'm riding in style
    All the way to the bank
    No longer handcuffed
    Who the hell do I thank
    The whole world's corrupt

    Stashed some cash in a hand
    Forbidding bad luck
    Psychic friends
    Dissin' saints...
    We're bastards alright
    Who to trust is a plus
    Those others let's spank
    Corporate whore on the floor
    Band members let's dance!

    Rock the house we've got clout
    And heaven on Earth
    At our worst we're still first
    Long live the curse...
    Take it all
    No one cares
    I gotta have more
    Break the seal on the door
    They STILL don't know God ~


    Darryl Abdu Omari :devil:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ! for when he knock let him in
    bust the seal so the doors swing open
    flow on brutha
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece/peace gave me the chills brotha

    made me take a second glance at myself while the time is nigh

    thank you brotha :)
     
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    Hold it down poet! They can only take what we let them have!
    feeling the vibe on this piece and loving it!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    God will remove our rose colored glasses eventually, but we may not like the manner in which he chooses to do so...Flow on with the message brotha.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for checking this out.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DANG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Throwin that truth DOWN!!!!

    :lift:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    True 'dat, Sister Gempis, thanks.
     
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