Black Poetry : hold it against me*

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  1. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i try
    to be penalized
    in between your thoughts
    your thighs
    your words
    your lips
    your speech your
    eyes...

    whatever my faults may be--
    hold you...
    i mean "it"

    *all of it*
    against me...
    every eternity your laugh brings
    stirs thoughts of happy childhoods--
    and phrases snatched and chakled
    within the throes of love

    and i want it against me at all times*
    i want to feel the warmth of your eminence
    surround me--

    i'm caught in your undertow...
    drown
    me.

    i need your presence...
    please
    stay around me...
    and hold it*
    i mean YOU

    *all of you against me*


    sean.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HELL YEAH!!

    I FEEL YA
    I TOO WISH TO BE HELD A PRISONER OF SHE
    I'VE BEEN THERE I KNOW DES SO WELL
    U BETTER WATCH OUT
    THESE QUEENZ GONNA WANNA HOLD U AT FAULT!:D
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sean

    it is I who be caught in your undertow.... beautiful
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Sean

    you make me proud son, to see you doing yo' thing

    l love how you looped this piece, kidd

    keep shinin'
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Seany!....

    as usual... you have taken my breath away!!

    AlwaysLove.
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA, RICH, so'ja and and ZoRb

    thanks for the read.
     
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