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  1. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sonku

    i gave birth,
    laughter from
    bowels, and
    you glance
    at me with
    reflection



    the topographical
    state of us
    inhabited
    my dreams and
    day-mares…i
    gathered
    imaginations of
    us into
    little balls of love and
    hid them in my cheek…
    i
    savored the taste
    of your name…the
    scent of your presence…
    the touch of your
    moans against my chest,
    and
    from my
    bowels
    i
    passed laughter…
    searing the silence of loneliness with
    relation.
    U
    are my staple
    my daily
    manna, my
    quail and pheasant…
    delicious morsels of
    eternity
    and fidelity tucked
    right under
    my soul.

    …God! how i dig your amber skin...





    ©2008 ‘el(OK)utio(NY)st’ Inc.
    ~AgAbus




     
  2. MRS. LADY

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    As I dwell on the outskirts
    of ur mind

    Indeed I smile at your ability
    to fertilize and talk dung

    The wind sings songs
    And carries my soul

    To the captivity of
    FREEDOM

    Only morsels for a cheek
    Or so to speak

    Are the one's swallowed
    In avoidance of incarceration

    As I lean on the arms
    of the lions and bind minds' penetration

    Amber skin was never meant for a jew

    God, how I despise a coward like you

    Ur slander and lies of your ability to birth
    Anything but doo doo

    May your tongue be the fire that
    burns only you

    If u ask me ur just another

    G.M. Tru
     
  3. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahhhh I see you sister lady...
     
  4. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Fire, i swam all through this passionate piece
     
  5. AgAbus

    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh my brotha...thank you.
     
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    Where in texas are you from?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i laid all up in it too ......what's up !
     
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    AgAbus Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Preciate the love bruh Rich!
     
  9. Phenomenon

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    That is what's up, Lamar was one of my choices back when I didn't know where I was gonna end up but I'm laying my head at Sam Houston State in Huntsville, does Lamar have a poetry slam team?
     
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    You make word choice and placement seem so effortless. Those feelings just oozed on out, and I'm enjoying your work poet.
     
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