Black Poetry : Hmmmm...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by triniti424, Sep 16, 2003.

  1. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word .....break it down and set it str8
    wanna be floppin' all late wit weak speech
    u done told da story in this stanza....wow!
     
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    this is tight
    great flow...
     
  4. true love

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    girl...you really broke him down! i loved this it was tight and right...do your thing girl! LOL
     
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    hey baby
    do fries go with dat shake
    [email protected] you got more curves then a lake
    has waves
    oh darlin
    if you was weed u b da illest hydro to blaze
    yo, look at dis tan
    i caught it off of the body rays
    of ya essence
    you say i'm spit'n game
    but truely i'm not mess'n
    around
    just listen to my heart sound
    as it goes pound pound pound
    your thick thighs remind me of waterfalls
    as they crash against the rock below
    and your silky smooth walk dropped my jaws
    as you strolled past in slo mo
    you think i'm spit'n game
    is that why you give me the no go
    suga
    it's not like i said eh yo ho
    but for real, maybe my lyrics aren't tight
    but it's still you i'm trying to know
    aiight....

    jus mess'n around triniti
    had to get some...:)
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Word . . . you right, down to the BET line. Love it, but expected it from you!
     
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    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmn...Mmn...Mmn!!!! Sounds like somebody got a dose of what "reel game" is all about. Really do! I got some knuckle head patnas that neeeeed.... to be slapped around.... with some of that....."Come correct, or don't come at all poetic conscious jabs and upper cuts you be throwin.....but Sista....This was a "HayMaker"...............Honored to be your Brotha...One Love
     
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    Whoa! Off the hook, out the door and down the street! But I expected that when I saw who wrote this. :D
     
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    Girl, I love it when you break it down like this...
    helpin to educate a player, lol
    love that last 2 lines, that was completely off the Rhictor!

    I would hate to be a brother who's game ain't tyte...
    tryin to step to a sister like you....ego would be broke,
    crushed and Obliterated.........poof- up in smoke:flamet:
    fa real!
     
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