Black Poetry : Hitting Hard

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  1. rhymebad

    rhymebad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hitting Hard

    Rhyming is a great call and like a eight ball got cats
    Playing pool and staying a fool not making shots my stats
    Running tables like Minnesota Fats use to do, where yall at?
    Got sick graphics like thick traffic advance at a crawl so
    My flow is very slow creeping but grow peeking itching like toe
    Jam so yall need tough acting tenactin to get through the day
    I fold MC’S like old cheese their flavor is gone they best pray
    Drop hot wild and suspicious like crocodiles vicious along riverbeds
    Where I deliver threads shiver when the feds chase this “oh my aching head”
    Got a Black Hummer to act in this summer temperature high
    Today so I try stay cool can’t play fool when it hot outside why
    The hot weather got to have have a plot clever . later made
    Some Gatoreade a mistake too much sodium dang then laid
    In sun got sick as a rabid dog not the best drink now I’m afraid
    Of throwing up or puking gee became numb in the shower finish
    My spinach bought my girl some flowers we kissed the pain diminish //
    Had a lame day all my words came out the same way wow the games
    People play a man is as good from the hood as he think he is can’t blame
    Someone else for your down fall can clown all you want, like the world
    I’m coming to an end while rumbling in the wind crumbling men hurl-
    Ing on the microphone hidden my flaw and like written law it’s best
    To obey
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man you said it best fo real this was hittin harder then you know bruh !!
     
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    thanks rich for real try speak truth in a different form
     
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    when I read this a song came to me. it is from the late James Brown and I heard him gone with your bad self say it loud............
     
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