Black Poetry : History

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  1. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cosmic colors
    radiant and full of flavor
    substance and matter so wonderful
    to your senses
    enjoying and lavishing
    in the magnificent beauty
    untouched and pure
    arena of atmospheres
    the heavenlies above
    blinging bright and without reasoning
    and understanding
    beyond the human mind
    inconceivable to capture and tame
    how planets and space exists


    Blue skies and delightful clouds
    bursting thru the sun
    shining with it's intoxicating heat
    The trees and birds that reside here
    nesting in their home feeding their young
    and surviving the game of life

    animals and wildlife
    living wild and free
    doing there own thang
    and living how God intended
    survivng from each other's bodies for livelihood

    The ocean....
    look at how vast and wide
    the seas stretch
    and expand
    the earth is 70% water
    and there are millions of species living in the sea
    a whole nutha' life down there existing
    families
    and predators seeking prey
    fish and mammals all sizes
    all shapes

    and look at us....
    enjoying all the blessings that God has
    put here for us
    And thank God for our minds and functioning limbs
    and 5 senses and our brain
    to maintain
    thoughts of reasoning
    and to accomplish goal and dreams
    thus making history
    and excelling and shining as bright as the sun
    flourishing as spectacular as the flowers

    Thank GOD for this life and all life that exists here on earth
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    EXCELLENT PIECE - this scribe is the reason I love poetry so much - enlightment through art...enchanting :)

    2fish
     
  3. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW!!!
    Thank you so much for the way you responded to my flow. I truly thank you 2Fish my friend, for your words. May God Bless you and all of His children always...
     
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    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo! this was tyte! for real . The imagery was all that!:)
     
  5. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Flava... I try!!!!
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah this one should be back on top...

    1:heart:
     
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    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2 Fish..... You are the sweetest!!!! Thanks my friend...
    ! Love
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WONDERFULLY DONE!

    Oh how "Excellent" is he who made everything.
    Beautiful piece and wonderful sentiment , taking
    time to appreciate the beauty that is creation
    and the wonderous elements that create HIS-Story.
    The Great "I AM"...present in all things.
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!:D
     
  9. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What can I say to you msluciousb... Thank you for those thoughtful and beautiful words gurl! May God chase you and run you down with blessings!! May your cup overflow with blessings, sooooo much until you won't have room enough to receive all of them!!! Praise the Lord in Heaven!!
    Bless you gurl
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see dis why poetic justice is heard loud
    dis lovely warm piece captured me from flyte
    i luv when u scribe .....makes me feel secured
     
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