Black Poetry : ...His Voice... (Response to $RICH$'s "Her Voice")

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Was a sexy bass tone in my ear
    The sound of lovin’
    As he captivated my fear
    The tint of his eyes
    In the gleam of the sun
    Took me by surprise
    And my fear began to run
    As his soft, strong tone
    Of his voice caught my ears
    And my mind begins to roam
    And think wise beyond my years
    I didn’t know a man’s beauty
    Could be what I want to seek
    Because his simple beauty
    Is more than skin deep
    As my body’s in the notion
    Of layin’ so sexily
    And my body’s in hypnotic motion
    By my hearts fast racing
    Is this my destiny full of desire?
    That’s something I have to know
    If he can do everything to ignite my fire?
    That would have me fully admiring so
    I wanna gaze into his beauty
    And search his entire soul
    I wanna touch his whole being
    Causing him to loose control
    I want the caressing in me
    To reach him so natural
    I wanna say things I thought never could be
    As he whispers the unspoken of
    And I want him to embrace me
    And hold me tighter than a glove
    My heart pace is over racing
    As his body wraps me in his love
    He’s the fulfillment of sweetness
    With the beauty completeness
    That has me feenin’ in weakness
    Makin’ me want some of his $$RICH$$ness
    His sexy voice that I hear
    Whispers a song to me, so clear
    As we dance to heavens bed
    And the wonderful voice of love
    Rests upon my head.

    the voice of HIS love…
     
  2. SkinDeep

    SkinDeep Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soooooooooo beautiful and sweet.....
    i love this!!!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a beautiful response...you go girl!
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u captured it all
    in the voice of
    love's call
    sweet and warm
    cross the orbs
    of galaxy
    in her tender call
    the voice so mild
    i smile and seek
    the voice so unique

    I love this here thank u
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ohhhhhh go Lovely go lovely lol
    let me hear too lol
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol, thanks triniti...
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    way ta just slam that (self-made) challenge ta the ground, gurl. ;) Your flow is just so so so good.
     
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