Black Poetry : his view (jus rambling) Pt.1 of the rambl'in trilogy.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by the_story, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he sat...
    watching her...

    wonderful as she was....
    pondering
    at 1000 memories
    of prophets that
    shook the earth they stood on....

    and she....

    she sung lametations
    of yesteryears and cried
    tears of "amen" that
    blew her sin away
    on her breath...

    strumed a guitar
    thats notes carried
    out the window
    to a neverland....

    jazz and blues
    roses on a bed
    with luv-crumpled sheets
    and bottles of
    white zinfindel
    that she splashed on her face
    to erase her pain
    were on her mind

    along with the essences of
    him....

    she was
    caught....
    tangled...
    enstrangled....
    slowed...
    d...
    o...
    w...
    n...

    she knew what it
    was to be loved
    again, and again,
    and again....

    raptured with wings
    to fly higher than
    clouds that held
    the rainfall...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    rumble on this was amazingly tyte
    she was caught !
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks ya rich
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    rambling..
    this was nice drop
    flow on poet of the week
     
  5. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yeah isn't it jus grand..im still in shock of that peot of the week thing...wow...im poet of the week...YYYYYYEEEEEEHHHHHHHHHAWWWW!!!!! *clears throat* thank u for enduring that....lol...now i do thank u for replyin to my poem mz.blak, glad u liked it...
    :heart:
    -story :coffee:
     
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    indeed i want more flow head drop the depth of ya pen
    on us this yo week in scribe let us feel ya as love given
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    If this is ramblin, then I'm scared to hear the straight up vibe. Do your thang, poet.
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and do my thang i shall....
    :heart:
    -story :coffee:
     
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    oh my gosh
    this is so :)
    baby gurl
    let the flow roll
    Peace
     
  10. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u bluwater, much love to u....
    -story :coffee:
     
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