Quiet Poetry Lounge : His Unborn Love

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tha-Emissary, Jul 16, 2005.

  1. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s true
    I am a man impregnated.
    Love is my joy, my burden.
    I carry it as a woman is with child.
    I have well exceeded woman’s standard nine months,
    Carrying for almost four years
    With every morning sickness comes a new Love sickness,
    To plague me morning, noon and midnight.
    Still there are so few words,
    Despite the passage of time
    To describe how this Love
    Is like a beautiful little life inside of me,
    Growing, kicking me everyday for not letting it be born.
     
  2. BrownEyed Girly

    BrownEyed Girly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go ahead and just let it be, let it grow, you never know what it will become. I loved this and i was really feeling this. Much love to you!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    see i know this so well
    i carry this love sickness
    spell upon me daily and the
    joy i can embrace as pain

    well said and i can feel every line....
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...You know I'm not even going to say much cause it won't do this piece justice. This was beautiful.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a great piece
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    New birth is a miracle of nature. (Your poem is truly inspiring!) - :welldone:

    Born again promises of tomorrow speak of love anew.
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tha-emissary

    ahh isnt this sweet we must flow sometimes call me at
    1-800- illbethere. flow on that emissary.
    cause you got tha flo that necessary
    to me to come visit ya in the month of febuarary.
    ok i'll stop.
     
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