Black Poetry : His Secret: part II

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Chastity, Jul 12, 2004.

  1. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 24, 2003
    Messages:
    243
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    student, but not for long
    Location:
    Nassau
    Ratings:
    +7
    The scales of infatuation,
    Covered my eyes.
    I watched him licked his lips.
    Felt him as he traveled,
    Up and down my spine,
    Working magic with his fingertips.
    And me hoping that in time,
    We could pleasure each other,
    All night long.
    But so wrong…
    How wrong?
    He had other plans.
    All of my fantasies,
    Of long walks,
    Holding hands,
    Had been shattered.
    Apparently the fact that I,
    Had a body that made other men,
    Say ‘Oh my!’, didn’t matter.
    He knew I had it like that,
    But when they were looking at me,
    Him I didn’t see,
    Because while I was avoiding their glance,
    By looking the other way,
    He was continuing to look back.
    He hid it so well,
    But eventually I was able to tell.
    His words were different,
    His touch felt like less.
    Maybe because he was using it,
    On someone else.
    I may have been a little attached,
    But only by the chains of fantasy story lines,
    Non-reality, which only took place in the depths of my mind.
    My heart I could say was not really into it,
    And for the first time, it didn’t need a mender,
    When the scales were removed from my eyes,
    I realized that his heart wasn’t into it.
    He had his own agenda.
    He wasn’t into me.
    Neither was he interested in my gender…
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    awesome flowing loving all of this pt.1 & 2 wooooooweeeeee!
    you bring a sweet poetic vibe to the community

    hope your considering or decide on a membership to enjoy the
    full features & benefits as a Premium member and Help support
    the community , look at what u may be missing out on !
    http://www.destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=26882

    tyte scribing chastity!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Whoa, that's some secret. When you said he was continuing to look back, I said to myself, uh oh...I liked the way you went about this, very crafty.
     
  4. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jun 4, 2003
    Messages:
    2,845
    Likes Received:
    36
    Gender:
    Female
    Location:
    nyc
    Ratings:
    +43
    i liked this poetic story...
    like watz when you said "he was looking the other way, he continued to look back"...i went i got him...
    and so did you...nice you got it young too...
    i think we all have a few
    of those tales..
    yours so well done..
    thanks for it...
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    Nice drop
    enjoyed the read....
    come drop it in chat sometimes
    www.destee.com/chat

    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Apr 5, 2004
    Messages:
    905
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    administrative
    Location:
    Bowie
    Ratings:
    +9
    :jawdrop:

    Wow, that's a secret that I hope is never revealed to me personally. Now I have to find Part 1. This was great poet
     
  7. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 30, 2004
    Messages:
    374
    Likes Received:
    9
    Occupation:
    Stress Management Therapist
    Location:
    Akasha
    Ratings:
    +9
    oh snap... the twist on this joint was tight
    i must say it was clever cause i never suspected...
    good job :jawdrop:


    keep writin' you got skillz
     
  8. Chastity

    Chastity Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Nov 24, 2003
    Messages:
    243
    Likes Received:
    7
    Occupation:
    student, but not for long
    Location:
    Nassau
    Ratings:
    +7
    Thanks for all of the love....this is actually a tru story...well sort of....it didn't really happen this way...but it was inspired by a real story :book: . I'm just glad I found out before I really found myself 'In Too Deep'....
     
Loading...