Black Poetry : His Sax Whaled

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  1. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His Sax Whaled

    With a warm embracing tone
    An astonishing dexterity a vigorous
    Tempo his sax whaled

    The love of his music you could
    Feel it in every note as he caressed
    You with a touch of his soulful
    Strut he knew so much

    He seemed to navigate space
    And timing was impeccable he
    Hit highs and lows with out
    Missing the scale as his sax
    Continues to whale

    His stroke was smooth along
    With his gyrating groove
    Creating a new song each time
    He moved and his sax whaled

    An elated precision now
    In dialogue with his tune
    As the sweet sounds circulate
    The room and his sax whaled

    I was compelled to hesitate
    But could not escape from this
    Unadulterated Jazz he played
    And yet his stroke was a key
    Note each time his sax whaled
    My body yelled sooooooo sweet
    For he hit the keys of E’s and
    Pleased me so well each time
    His sax whaled

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !!!!
    this had me from da start
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    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you $$Rich$$
    your hug is so appreciated (smile)

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