Black Poetry : His Purple Poems

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His presence uncovered itself.
    It was all in the way
    He closed the door,
    All in the way his
    Soft eyes penetrated me.

    Poetry, was dripping from his lips.
    I tasted and knew that it was good,
    So I began to feel every line
    Of his purple poems.

    His smile, his teasing gestures,
    Performed his purple adjectives on me.
    My eardrums vibrated wildly as they
    Spoon fed to my soul,
    Every vowel that felled
    From the meat of his tongue.

    His presence was purple.
    In the midst of loving me,
    He gathered me as one who gathers
    Lavender petals from the doorstep,
    After a soft rainfall.

    His lips upon me, were nothing more
    Than the anxious feet of summer,
    Hopping all over my body.
    Moist purples all over my, my...oh my.

    His pen dripped with purple,
    He was ready to write on me and
    I was ready to experience every line.
    His pen pointed towards heaven.
    That's where he took me, after
    The placing of his poetry.
    His teasing stanzas
    Brought forth a song in me,
    That had very few words;
    Mainly, the humming testimony of his goodness.

    The rhythm of his meter was immeasurable.
    Each swelling thrust became a free verse as the
    Rules began to break under our intensity.
    When the last rule broke,
    All restrictions vanished,

    But then,

    His every other line began to rhyme until
    All of my lines were curved and locked,
    Into his powerful rhythmic rhymes.
    Our metaphors clashed head on,
    Under the title...'Immense Pleasure',
    Then felled gently onto linen paper
    To reflect on yet,
    Another moment of love...

    Beholding his purple poems.




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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ahhhh!! da sweet lace of his purple poetic pleasure that fulfilling
    this was mad awesomeeeeeeeee!
     
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    The weight of this poem...smh...the lines are laden with the density of shared love. Eloquent beyond compare Joyce...wow.
     
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    I'm sure the "Purple Rain" ..danced gently across the waves of the two hearts...melted as one.
    Great piece poet, very good to see you around again.
     
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    love the flo my queen!
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you poets....your comments are appreciated.:wave:
     
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