Black Poetry : His Purple Poems

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  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His presence uncovered itself.
    It was all in the way
    He closed the door,
    All in the way his
    Soft eyes penetrated me.


    Poetry, was dripping from his lips.
    I tasted and knew that it was good,
    So I began to feel every line
    Of his purple poems.

    His smile, his teasing gestures,
    Performed his purple adjectives on me.
    My eardrums vibrated wildly as they
    Spoon fed to my soul,
    Every vowel that felled...
    From the meat of his tongue.

    His presence was purple.
    In the midst of loving me,
    He gathered me as one who gathers
    Lavender petals from the doorstep,
    After a soft rainfall.

    His lips upon me, were nothing more
    Than the anxious feet of summer,
    Hopping all over my body.
    Moist purples all over my, my...oh my.

    His pen dripped with purple,
    He was ready to write on me and
    I was ready to experience every line.
    His pen pointed towards heaven.
    That's where he took me, after
    The placing of his poetry.

    His teasing stanzas
    Brought forth a song in me,
    That had very few words;
    Mainly, the moaning testimony of his goodness.

    The rhythm of his meter was immeasurable.
    Each swelling thrust became a free verse as the
    Rules began to break under our intensity.
    When the last rule broke...
    All restrictions vanished.

    ...But then

    His every other line began to rhyme until
    All of my lines were curved and locked,
    Into his powerful rhythmic rhymes.
    Our metaphors clashed head on,
    Under the title...'Immense Pleasure',
    Then felled gently onto linen paper
    To reflect on yet,
    Another moment of righteous love...

    Beholding his purple poems.


    Copyright 2002 by ~j
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was so divine , da purple poem
    in motion here i feel it
     
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    gurl you had me...
    this was wonderful posed
    i started blushing lol
    tight drop sis
    Angel
     
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    Very nice....
    my expectations are always exceeded
    and I must say...
    the visit to the website was def' worth my time...
    A beautiful garden...of "Joyce"...

    Another masterpiece...

    *Applause*
     
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    PropheticNsyght Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce you are simply divine! :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:

    Simply stated! Deeply meant!
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:
     
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    Wonderful purple-ful poem. It make me smile when I read it.
     
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    Wow. This purple write was extremely seductive, had to catch my breath there for a moment....lol. This was, just, divine.
     
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    He gathered me as one who gathers
    Lavender petals from the doorstep,
    After a soft rainfall.


    sistah sistah you are intense in your words, adjectives, metaphors,..........the list goes on an on. an inspiration and a friend. i'm down with this one, it was like looking at myself in this one. keep flowing, keep going, keep growing, but most of all continue.................... :star:
     
  9. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you poets...your responses overwhelm me.

    Much Love...

    ~j
     
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    you are indeed dazzling
    liking this :)
    wonderful flow
    very smooth..
    flow on :)
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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