Black Poetry : His Kiss

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  1. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His kiss...
    an effortless work
    of art

    His kiss
    revealed
    what words could not

    His kiss
    commanded
    my full attention

    His kiss
    swept me off
    into another dimension

    His kiss
    ignited
    a raving passion

    His kiss
    incited
    electromagnetic reactions

    His kiss
    awakened in me
    untapped energies

    His kiss
    drew between us
    a spellbinding synergy

    His kiss
    made outer space
    seem suddenly shallow

    His kiss
    rendered my fondness
    as a blossoming sallow

    His kiss
    penetrated my existence
    like a sun ray

    His kiss
    swiftly became
    my famished heart's buffet

    and I long for his kiss...
    to this day...
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da kiss of words
    is da kiss of love
    he will kiss ya again & again !
     
  3. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH how much I wish I had written this!!!!!!! It is spectacular in it's imagery. The subject matter so basic to life, is there anything more compelling then a kiss? The emotions conveyed are sooooooo true, so true, for all of our true loves kisses, this IS exactly how we feel.
     
  4. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A big :kiss: for ya, $$RICH$$, for the :love:, and

    Gaylee, I'm infinitely pleased by your response, and grateful to know how much you felt me on this; much appreciation to ya, Sustah :)
     
  5. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a true work of art Nia...excellent penmanship
    Keep up tha good work!

    1luv
     
  6. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nia

    I can't say enuff about how I dig it slim... Course you know ima fan though...

    Reas
     
  7. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, Poets

    Twofish~ Thanks and :heart:, my Systah of the Cosmos. I greatly appreciate your words and your support.

    Reason~ So grateful that you stopped in for a :kiss:, my dear; your words bring me honour. Glad to know the diggin' is mutual.

    :)
     
  8. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Things that make one go oolala!

    ...>fades in>

    What a kiss! Takes me back to a moment when I shared a kiss of that magnitude with someone...ahhh the memories.

    Nice work poet, reall enjoyed the read.

    <fades out<...
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it's amazin' what those kisses can make you do even afta all is said and done...nia, i'm lovin' this piece and tha flo.
     
  10. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    couldn't agree more with this statement!!! that's what i was thinking as i read this peice...it left me grinning!
     
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