Black Poetry : His inspiration................

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  1. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His inspiration..............

    His inspiration
    quenching my thirst for spiritual stimulation
    mental ejaculation
    ohh the perspiration
    hand me a glass of water
    to put out this fire
    too late...
    your heat has already consumed me
    for you are in a place
    untraveled
    touched only by God
    unknown to all
    including me
    faith...
    allows me to allow you
    to See me further
    combing the walls
    of my mind
    climbing the peeks and valleys of my subconscious
    making your home in my heart
    decorating
    with beautiful poetry….
    Your gift……

    Slow dancing to the silence in the room
     
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    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Indeed

    A very nice flow--close--personal and well done--Amun-Ra
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    8th GURL U JUST DONT KNOW
    U GOT ME DANCING IN MY CHAIR!
    THANKS
     
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    8th Wonder

    I love your flow everytime I read........You know I got the beacon shining on you....
     
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    EIGHTHHHH!!...

    sistah... sistah... sistah!!
    i had to spell your name out
    for dis one!!

    it is beautifully tyght!!
    umm hmmm... dats ryght!! flow on...

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA

    I told ya....
    just try'n to be like you ma!! lol
    no but really, it's always a pleasure for you to read my work... you inspire me...

    Thx sis,


    Bishop

    Brotha, its always
    a pleasure to have
    been approved by the
    "Lighthouse"
    thank you very much...


    Rich

    You are such a sweetie..
    You always give me love...
    Thanks...


    Dnommo

    my sweet love..
    you know it was you
    who inspired this piece...
    so see, you could'nt have missed it..
    it belongs to you...
     
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    love this ...

    for you are in a place
    untraveled
    touched only by God
    unknown to all
    including me
    faith...


    simply beautiful Sis

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    8th wonder

    I sit in awe! This is peace....soooooo beautiful ~ and such a soul-deep tribute to the one who touches you secret places! Yeah sis, I FEEL this!

    Thank you

    A
     
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    Ooooo 8th!!!!

    I likes this flow most def!!!

    Keep it up and you'll be flyin' higher than those clouds of which ya travel through!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    go on now!

    i just....
    i...
    this was just...
    man....

    i can't even find the words for it!!


    u got the skillz gurl!!
     
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