Black Poetry : HIS EYES

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  1. peach_so_sweet

    peach_so_sweet Active Member MEMBER

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    HIS EYES
    CAPTIVATE ME
    LOOKING AT HIM
    I SEE CLEARLY...
    I SEE HIS PAIN,
    HIS FEAR,
    HIS LOVE,
    HIS TEARS
    I SEE HIM FOR WHO HE REALLY IS
    NOT THE ONE HE IS
    WHEN HE'S WITH HIS FRIENDS
    BUT HIM
    THERES SOMETHING SPECIAL
    ABOUT HIM...
    HIS HEART IS PURE
    FRESH FROM PAIN
    I KNOW CAUSE MY HEARTS THE SAME
    BUT HIS EYES
    THEY CAPTIAVTE ME
    THEY STEAL MY SOUL
    THEY HYPNOTIZE ME
    I FEEL HIM
    I HEAR HIS WANTS...
    HE WANTS ME
    AND FOR US TO FOREVER BE
    IN LOVE
    IN LOVE
    FOR ALL OF ETERNITY
    I SEE
    HIS EYES CAPTIVATE ME.
    :smooch: :smooch:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sound like me ......u been peepin in my window !
    this was so sweet and lovely surely he see u the same way
    true love and divine .
     
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    i know just what ya saying here...nicely done...
     
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    THANKS BROTHA YOUR WORDS MEAN ALOT :D
     
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    peach_so_sweet Active Member MEMBER

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    I REALLY APPERCIATE THE COMPLIMENT THANKS SISTA :D
     
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    Yes, they do say that eyes are the windows to the soul. I dig what you're saying, flow on.
     
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    most welcome and likewise whole heart from above ....
     
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    WOw... I feel the same.. Even.. when I see my "him" on TV.. I feel.. he is only talking.. to me.

    The eyes... what would we do if we were all blind.

    This is really nice. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    see within me through my eyes and i shall show you the world. a wise man once said,

    "When the eyes of a woman are veiled with tears...it is the man who no longer sees clearly..."

    your piece reminds me of such...

    one.
     
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    peach_so_sweet Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you brotha! :lips: :lips: :lips: :lips:
     
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