Black Poetry : His Entrance Was Purple

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, Jul 20, 2002.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a touching piece Sistah Joyce.

    It brought me to excitement in the
    beginning of the read, and let
    me down easy at the end~

    Brilliant, just the way I like it~~!!

    N2 :)
     
  3. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gurl it is so nice to see you up in heah! I've missed you. I figured you must have got bogged down somewhat in your work or bought yourself a new motorcycle. :)
    Thanks for the read...glad I didn't drop you at the end. :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow! deep flow Joyce
    the depth / the emotion
     
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    Wow! That was deeply emotional.

    BlaqButterfly
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich and Butterfly. I do get emotional sometimes...sniff. :)
     
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    At first i was thinkin' this cat was Don Juan but i know you have betta flava than that ;)

    anyway nice read and funny.
    *collab preppin'*
     
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    Call me nosey, but I wanna
    know what happened next. :)

    Nice and very visual piece...

    Scribeaboutit! It helps.
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    J'hiah...thanks for the read bro. I like storylines with a twist.

    CoCo...You expressed the very thing I strove (is dat a word)...visual. Glad you enjoyed it.
     
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    hey bring on pt.2
    coz dis twist was funky and jazzy
    emotionally and a bit of mack style
    where's pt.2 boo !
     
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