Black Poetry : His Daughter is Loved

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a beautiful image
    sitting upon daddy's lap, all bubbly and light
    A daughter, eyes a gleam like sunshine
    Time spent with daddy before falling asleep tonight
    Makes me think of the special times
    I had with my own dad
    made me feel like his precious jewel
    Gee, the times that we had
    Oh the joys the memories can afford you
    But I digress, back to these two...
    I imagine earlier that day
    he kissed her after she arose
    Said, "There, there", as he plaited her hair
    Looked at her and thought, It's amazing how she grows
    As they spent the day together
    running errands, eating meals,
    laughing at silly jokes sprinkled throughout their day,
    Immeasurable, the love for her he feels
    She sings little songs to herself as she plays,
    feeling like the diamond she is within
    His admiration brightens her luster, making her
    even more warm and comfortable in her own skin
    What a beautiful image
    sitting upon daddy's lap, all bubbly and light
    A daughter, eyes a gleam like sunshine
    Time spent with daddy before falling asleep tonight
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful image and flow

    Daughters are special
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    This really warms my heart as i sit here nice and cuddle
    with my baby girl eatting chips and a glass of milk i can
    see this in me ever so dearly .....i really love this heartfelt scribe
    as i too envision it while i'm doing the very things ....Thank u for this
    WATZZZZZ
     
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    this flowed nice and it's amazing how people flow and don't rhyme i felt this in every father's life there's that special child a daughter never forgets mom and dad please peep this (http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=46376)
     
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    Daddy's little twirl, Daddy's Pearl, Daddy's world...
    all wrapped up in his precsious baby girl.
    Daddy already knows, she will soon run the world.
    Nice and warm drop poet...^5
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes they certainly are Hodee. Thank you brotha poet.
    Rich, you're quite welcome, and I thank you for saying so. A father's love means so much.
    Well rhymebad, no, a daughter doesn't forget her parents, and I tend to rhyme in mine, in every other line, but to each his/her own. I'll check it out, thanks.
    Hey queent, I liked those lines from you. Care to write some more? Thank you much sis.
     
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    beautiful write watz! love to work with you let a sista know!:hearts4:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your kind response nevar. A collab? Sounds great, and I will get back to you on that one.
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    This is so lovely and beautiful.
    Coming from a daddy's little girl.
     
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